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Far in deepest sands
Almost buried a tower stands
A tower made of stone
Crystal glass and bleached bone
A hundred metres high

Legend of the tower tell
Of a people which once rose and fell
Before their death they took their power
And sealed it all within the tower
Long before Beladi reign

A thousand years have come and gone
Greatest deeds have since been done
But no matter where the thieves have crept
The tower all its secrets kept
Along their drying husks

Sometimes when the sun grows dim
A traveller comes and brings with him
A desert rose, a gear, a star
Stories and tales from way and far
And whispers of the tower

They walk into the riddler's den
Never to be seen again
Like oh so many done before
And after them will many more
To catch at least a glimpse

Of who buried riches wants to claim
Only skull and bones remain
Of those called no single thread
Legend tells they are not dead
But welcomed into the tower

The storm subsides
The mass divides
A traveler comes from the sands
Battered, weary, and in her hands
A bloodied desert rose

Feverish she tells her tale
Succeeded where others failed
Ventured through the halls of stone
Crystal glass and bleached bone
And came across no soul

From the light into the dark
Dared not to light a spark
Straight paths curling through themselves
And in between a thousand shelves
Every deed which had been done

Parchment, paper, leather, hide
Words in reddest ink inside
From the first dawn til today
But the silent halls betray
Only the chosen remain unscarred

Her last words are of bronze rings
Etched markings and other things
It spins around a sun of glass
A model of the planet's path
Made to show and teach the called

Kelehëu's tower is its name
And like moths to nightly flame
It draws the greedy of any kind
Some are killed, but the knowing find
Admittance to the tower
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Look who finally finished a literary piece again.

Same verse as The Serpent, The Amber Mills, Harriet Sage, and Weberknecht's Carnival.

Reading comprehension quiz! The god Kelehëu has four fields of expertise, so to say. What are they?

~SulZala
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~DragonflyLite Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is excellent. I enjoy reading poems that give me tactile impressions, and you did a great job of bringing this one to life. Very, very visual.
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~SulZala Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Happy you liked it ::)
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~YoshiofRedemption Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
That is amazing!!!! :D
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~SulZala Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
happy you like it ::)
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~YoshiofRedemption Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
:D
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~Annuski Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
This is amazing, I love the way you told the story in the form of a poem not prose. And the story comes across perfectly!
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~SulZala Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
happy you liked it ::)
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